Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Night Watch

If I was the real son of the old man, I would feel many different ways about what happened. I would feel sad for myself because I couldn't be with my father when he die. I would be angry at the hospital because they didn't get me there in time or make sure that they call me - the right guy. I'd want all of the people that did this fired. I would be very happy that the other guy stayed with my father when I couldn't be there and thank him. God would bless him because he helped my father and me.

1 comment:

  1. This is a very good personal response to the narrative Ahmend but please watch your use of tense to help the clarity of your writing. 8/10

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