When I first entered the halls of Henry Ford Community Collge after my graduation from Fordosn High School, I was easily engulfed in a community so strange. The mere fact that I had to mingle with strangers scared me , but it also, excited me to work hard and challenge myself to reach my goals. I felt like I needed to be strong so that I could have my piece of happiness.
People in HFCC are polite and helpful. Students are willing to help and always there for you whenever you needed them. When I first stepped to the halls of HFCC I was lost and I didn’t know where is the registration office, but a kind student came to me and gave me a hand. That kid’s name was Ali. Ali helped me a lot through my applicaton proccesses. Other random students helped me find my classes.
Also, the student in HFCC work hard to earn the grade they deserve, which motives me to work hard as well, and endeavor to improve myself. They alway try their best to be at class on time, do their homework and study day by day.
Now, as I reminisce about my first year of college, I’m so glad that I go to HFCC where students are polite and work-harders. I became motived and I always try to be better than the day before. HFCC is changing me to the better.
Is this for writing? It is very good, but your "purpose" is wrong. Remember, you are writing to high school students and trying to convince them why they should come to Henry Ford.
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