Homework from Evergreen Pgs. 18 & 19 for Kristi

Page 18

1.)This was a very effective paper because it used smell and sound to describe a many different

things that found at her grandmother's house.

2.)Yes. It makes me want to know what those 100 sounds and smells were.

3.)hearing: "birds chirping", "kitchen cabinets creaked open and closed", "the sizzle of bacon"

smell: "smell of cut grass", "smell of fresh bread", "perfume"

4.)When she talked about "birds chirping," that was talking about sound.

5.)No changes or improvements.

6.)Didn't see any mistakes.

Page 19 WRITING AND REVISING IDEAS

1.) At my house in Yemen, I experienced a many sounds and smells of happiness. I would wake up to hear the voices of my family talking and ocean waves. When walking on the beach there were delicious smells of bread baking and fish cooking from shops by the water. You could always hear Yemeni flutes and smell wonderful incense while walking down the streets. These things will always remind me of home.